Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Pirate Sun

Beneath a patchwork quilt
of the long yellowed grasslands
As if a cannon fired
An explosion of crows
Kite tails a black feather boa
out across the skies
then like an organ grinder winds itself up
like a giant black eye patch
pirates out the sun

4 comments:

  1. I love this visual picture...it has painted itself in my head!

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  2. Very wonderful images and use of language. Excellent.

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  3. "Hi" this is Amanda (iblogmoore from twitter and blogginwithamanda) I really like this piece the ending is brilliant! have a great day

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  4. The imagery here is lovely Beez. Enjoyed this very much.

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