Saturday, May 26, 2012

Abandonment


sparse not white 
hollow no echo 
vast 
humming 
the soundless hum of air 
trapped 
with no bars
a hostage
of denial
less than 
two feet from reach
I could have been on the moon 
how many distances 
have passed between us 
and I like an ant 
and they above in a plane perhaps
look down 
and see a multitude of specks 
Im so small 
inside and out 
smaller than an ant
and time is enormous
in the abandonment
distance and time
can be as close
as you and I 

8 comments:

  1. The crush of time and space can me a harsh one. Until you realise that you can't crush yourself.

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  2. Very beautiful images
    leading to such evocative feelings,
    excellent.

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  4. came by to see what you were up to and got caught in the words
    beautiful, sad, real
    big hugs for a dear lady

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  5. Too close. Too real. In the middle of these words, feeling their weight.

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